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Crowded Void

Comic 6 - 1-4

13th Aug 2013, 3:04 PM in 1: Alone at First
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theoriginalmoser 13th Aug 2013, 3:04 PM edit delete
FINALLY finished this one. I've spent a lot of time over the past few weeks drawing and sketching trying to get my basic skills to a higher level as well as trying new things with Photoshop and Illustrator. Hopefully it doesn't take forever knock out the next one. Soon the story will actually begin to take shape. At the same time I'm about to embark on a cross-country move so we'll see how much I actually get done.

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Centcomm 14th Aug 2013, 6:30 PM edit delete reply
Centcomm
good job .. and best of luck on the move!
Meego 7th Aug 2014, 7:34 AM edit delete reply
Ok, I don't really get what you are doing here, narratively. But maybe you're setting your audience up for a punchline next comic? I guess I'll find out...
ranger_brianna_new 7th Aug 2014, 1:41 PM edit delete reply
ranger_brianna_new
Um, there already is a punchline in this comic? The last panel is about how he doesn't like talking to people.

The humor might be a bit dryly delivered, but it's still there.
theoriginalmoser 7th Aug 2014, 3:01 PM edit delete reply
Yeah, some of these older ones didn't flow as well. I've learned a lot more about proper text-bubble flow to clear up stuff like this (i.e. Top left-to right, always having the person on the left speak first, etc.). At the same time, these older ones are more stand-alone and I was trying to figure out how things were going.

I appreciate the comments though! Always nice to know people are actually reading this.

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