Crowded Void

15th Jul 2014, 5:15 PM in 2: The Joint Intestinal Monarchy

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theoriginalmoser 15th Jul 2014, 3:00 AM edit delete

In hindsight I need to find a way to better distinguish these two brothers when in their space suits so not only the reader can tell them apart, but myself as well. Thank's to my unofficial copy-editor for always pointing this kind of crap out.

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Edit: So my unofficial copy-editor pointed out a typo in the first panel after it posted. That's why I like having her help! The changes have been made and all typos (to my knowledge) are fixed!

GW 15th Jul 2014, 7:45 PM edit delete reply

Don't feel bad. NASA had the same problem telling astronauts apart on the moonwalks. They eventually made the space suits so the mission commander had a red stripe on his sleeve and around the knee of his suit. Maybe you can give one of the brothers a stripe. I'm enjoying this chapter BTW.

ranger_brianna_new 6th Aug 2014, 11:06 PM edit delete reply

You'd think they'd approach with a little bit more caution, but I suppose we ARE talking about ships that have gone into an earthworm.

Meego 8th Aug 2014, 6:33 AM edit delete reply

Aha, so we get back to the main storyline.

Comic 16 - 2-2

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